Date: August 7, 2005 @ 8:58 PM
The vocals aren't great but their not horrible either, it seems like your just starting off being a vocalist and you sound young too, so you'll get better the more you do it. There are some off-times to but it's never really very bad.
The guitar in the chorus seems stutterish, theres stops when you should just be holding the note and sliding it up to the next chord. The solo is spot on though! Oh, and try and fade the ending E5 chord out when you end the chorus and go back to the verse just sounds better than the heavy distortion just cutting out suddenly.
Good job though, it's a good beginner song! Keep it up!
Droquen